I'm noticing I'm reverse of everyone else on here . . . everyone else has said they are more controlled IRL, this is showing me I'm less controlled IRL than on here.

more gnomes appear and charge COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gnomes respawn WE WANT OUR COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah, I got that now. (Why didn't Illia go with them?)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! (I read FF and Fork Factory. you threw me very far off with that)

shows back up so . . . why didn't they let me leave after 2 hours? I had to teleports bc they boarded up the school.

they blow fire at you while flapping away

walk to Dragon Befriending School . . . now what?

. . .

Sorry! untapes you and gifts cookie

bag digging here!

would you like one?

uh, no? shoves something in my bag

No! (I don't think that was ever said in Hamilton . . . )

WHERE DO I GET ONE!

BUT SETTING THINGS ON FIRE IS CHAOS! AND THAT'S WHAT I FIGHT FOR ANYWAY!

please correct the chapter title. wow . . . I feel bad for . . . basically everyone but the adults (excluding Oskar) and Janner right now, no Idea who the random girl Artham is holding or why everyone is so upset about it. OR WHO SHE IS! honestly, Id probs read the alternate ending to this as well. but then the entire sequel would be entirely different. (I was kinda struggling with Warden's Daughter where I wanted her to be. As in Clovenfast, Green Hollows, or Skree. I might also do a different version for that . . . )

I WAS ABOUT TO THROW A CHAIR AT YOU! OH MY WORD! (also, chapter 20 also says 19. and . . . I clicked that one before this one. Only read a few words! Did not spoil it for myself!)

HOW DARE YOU! YOU EVIL HUMAN! (Well, I think i've seen worse with Ember . . . sadly . . . )

YAY! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO