I think this is really good I can see there's a great story coming, can't wait! I also really like it in 1st person

And the fat one, ’e just grabbed a sword and spun in circles so fast we thought ’e might up and float away. From N!obE the fangs were talking about it later

Ok yeah I will add that in

I like that! I was already thinking in that direction but I didn't think about Janner. Thanks

Do you guys have any ideas for the story I have writers block.

Thank you so much, I am reading the book while I'm writing to get the facts right. I'll post another one soon I don't like squeeblins that much way to sentimental for me. ** runs to writing desk to finish part 2 to avoid squeeblins*

Artham is amazing

No but he's awesome

Nope sorry Peet is best

Good but I almost feel the need to change your mind